I want to publish that way because I believe it will give the book the best distribution, especially in libraries where underrepresented young people could borrow it. The target audience is teenagers who have an incarcerated family member, teens who are treated as outcasts for situations beyond their control, and Latinas preparing for their quinceañera.
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I need to create a new query letter.
Here's the latest (without a personal info paragraph, obviously). I'll be revising this story. Please help!
One comment I got from an agent asked Lenore's dad's thoughts and feelings on moving her to another school, especially with the danger to her.
I know the answer.
It isn't in the book.
It NEVER comes up.
I do know.
Why would include something in the query that isn't in the book???
Some have disliked Lenore's anxiety and neurodivergence.
Okay... but...
Some people don't like neurodivergent people. Sorry to upset the Boomers, but the Young Adult audiences I'm aiming toward are more tolerant. Maybe I need to work the words "liberal left-wing" into the description?? Are we there?
"This book will absolutely be banned from Florida."
Maybe I need that disclaimer upfront?
Feedback is needed! I'm revising, so please make suggestions if you have any. 💗
I can’t help you but the story sounds good.
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Locksley at George's GP World
That's exactly what I was doing this month for one manuscript I have out on submission, and last month for another. I revised both, redid their synopses, and created new query letters. All in the hopes of finally landing an agent. I wish you all the luck with your querying journey!
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